挽回死心男人的绝招

The next morning,成功挽回变心男人的绝招,挽回男朋友,教你如何挽回死心的男朋友, a big black bear came to steal watermelon, watermelon field it think it is a painted watermelon largest moon! But is so dirty, little bear hugged it to the river, wash up, suddenly, hand slipped, “flutters!” The moon fell into the river! The moon had a bath in the river, small black bears that watermelon slipped away, in fact it is the reflection of the moon!

The moon slowly rising to the sky, and looking for the rabbit to the watermelon field, while the moonlight looked up, and the moon is in his smile!

Miss Lin composition comment:

This article is worthy of our learning are: small the author use the tone of anthropomorphic add imagination colour, bringing us a fairy tale kingdom, and the moon actually will fall down in a story…

Using dialogue about what’s bad?

Throughout simple dialogue to promote the plot development, do not appear, the language is very concise, very test writing ability oh! End thought-provoking, leaving readers daydream – why does the moon smiled to get up?

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